1 00:00:03,280 --> 00:00:06,413 Welcome back. Now you've done paragraph three 2 00:00:06,413 --> 00:00:09,965 yourselves and we're going to go on to paragraph four. 3 00:00:09,965 --> 00:00:13,308 Might seem like were doing an awful lot of this, 4 00:00:13,308 --> 00:00:18,462 but remember, the only way to learn close analysis is to practice, practice, 5 00:00:18,462 --> 00:00:23,894 practice, practice, practice over and over again on as many passages as you can 6 00:00:23,894 --> 00:00:26,889 find. So we're going to spend one more lecture 7 00:00:26,889 --> 00:00:32,599 going though paragraphs four and five of Robert Redford's piece in the Washington 8 00:00:32,599 --> 00:00:35,803 Post from 1997. The title was, A Piece of God's 9 00:00:35,803 --> 00:00:40,254 Handiwork.. In paragraph 4 starts, sounds like 10 00:00:40,254 --> 00:00:45,055 Washington double-speak to me. Well, what is it that sounds like 11 00:00:45,055 --> 00:00:49,532 Washington double-speak to him. It's the sentence at the end of the 12 00:00:49,532 --> 00:00:54,811 previous paragraph that you analyzed and, that's the claim that they issued the 13 00:00:54,811 --> 00:01:00,023 permit without a full review using an abbreviated review and they didn't even 14 00:01:00,023 --> 00:01:02,830 look at the leases on other federal lands. 15 00:01:02,830 --> 00:01:07,908 So, he's saying that sounds like the kind of thing Washington does when they 16 00:01:07,908 --> 00:01:11,250 double-speak. Double-speak is obviously a metaphor. 17 00:01:11,250 --> 00:01:14,630 Right? It's a metaphor for saying one thing to 18 00:01:14,630 --> 00:01:19,995 one person, another thing to another person or sometimes, saying one thing 19 00:01:19,995 --> 00:01:25,361 that seems to mean one thing when what they really mean is another thing. 20 00:01:25,361 --> 00:01:30,432 But however you interpret the metaphor of double-speak, it's not good. 21 00:01:30,432 --> 00:01:36,385 So we can indicate that double-speaking is a negative evaluation and it's a 22 00:01:36,385 --> 00:01:39,692 metaphor, but clearly negative in its meeting. 23 00:01:39,692 --> 00:01:44,470 You wouldn't say someone who's speaking properly is double-speak. 24 00:01:44,470 --> 00:01:50,808 Notice however, that he has this phrase sounds like and it sounds like it, to 25 00:01:50,808 --> 00:01:53,060 him, what sounds like doing. 26 00:01:53,060 --> 00:01:57,460 Well, he's not saying that it is Washington double-speak. 27 00:01:57,460 --> 00:02:00,817 So he's guarding it. He's weakening the claim. 28 00:02:00,817 --> 00:02:05,368 He's not saying it is. He's saying it sounds like and so that 29 00:02:05,368 --> 00:02:09,212 can be labeled as a guarding term. Okay. 30 00:02:09,212 --> 00:02:17,313 So he's guarded that claim, but now he's going to go on and argue against the plan 31 00:02:17,313 --> 00:02:23,955 that Washington was using. I've spent considerable time on these 32 00:02:23,955 --> 00:02:27,647 extraordinary lands for years. I've spent for years. 33 00:02:27,647 --> 00:02:31,747 Let's just circle that whole thing to indicate that whole phrase, because it's 34 00:02:31,747 --> 00:02:34,480 just all doing the same thing. What's it doing? 35 00:02:34,480 --> 00:02:38,153 It's assuring you. You say, because I have spent so much 36 00:02:38,153 --> 00:02:41,492 time on these lands, I spent so many years on them. 37 00:02:41,492 --> 00:02:45,699 You can trust me to know what's going on. I've got the evidence. 38 00:02:45,699 --> 00:02:50,107 Notice, like other assuring terms, it's not giving you the evidence. 39 00:02:50,107 --> 00:02:54,381 It's saying, you ought to trust me, because I've got the evidence. 40 00:02:54,381 --> 00:02:58,522 I've had the experience. So it's a perfect example of assuring, 41 00:02:58,522 --> 00:03:03,865 because it's saying that he has reasons without actually giving the reasons and 42 00:03:03,865 --> 00:03:09,305 that's why you can't question his reasons because you haven't spent considerable 43 00:03:09,305 --> 00:03:14,548 time on those extraordinary lands. And, of course, he follows that up with 44 00:03:14,548 --> 00:03:17,124 another assuring term. He says, and I know. 45 00:03:17,124 --> 00:03:20,272 When you say, I know, that's an assuring term, 46 00:03:20,272 --> 00:03:25,781 a mental assuring term, because it's describing the mental state as being one 47 00:03:25,781 --> 00:03:29,358 of knowledge. Knowledge implies truth, and to say I 48 00:03:29,358 --> 00:03:33,937 know it is to imply that it's true to ensure you that it's true. 49 00:03:33,937 --> 00:03:35,582 Okay? But what does he know? 50 00:03:35,582 --> 00:03:40,375 He knows that an oil rig in their midst, would have a major impact. 51 00:03:40,375 --> 00:03:42,880 And what about that? A major impact. 52 00:03:42,880 --> 00:03:45,909 Okay? Now he's clearly saying it would be a bad 53 00:03:45,909 --> 00:03:48,809 impact, but does he come out and say it's bad? 54 00:03:48,809 --> 00:03:50,550 No, he just says it's major. 55 00:03:50,550 --> 00:03:53,957 Okay? So it's not an evaluative term that would 56 00:03:53,957 --> 00:03:57,293 be labeled as nothing if nothing is an option. 57 00:03:57,293 --> 00:04:01,933 So, he's clearly suggesting that it's bad, but he's not saying it, 58 00:04:01,933 --> 00:04:05,776 so it shouldn't be marked as an evaluative term, okay? 59 00:04:05,776 --> 00:04:09,184 Next, what's more. Well, what's more is kind of a 60 00:04:09,184 --> 00:04:13,100 conjunction, but what came before this was an argument 61 00:04:13,100 --> 00:04:16,929 that it would have a major impact based on his assurance. 62 00:04:16,929 --> 00:04:21,901 And so when he says, once more, he's suggesting that what's going to come next 63 00:04:21,901 --> 00:04:26,605 is yet another argument for why we shouldn't have these, these permits 64 00:04:26,605 --> 00:04:29,561 issued. He's going to tell you other bad things 65 00:04:29,561 --> 00:04:32,988 about them. So that can be a premise marker, because 66 00:04:32,988 --> 00:04:37,728 what comes after it is the premise. They want to drill to find oil. 67 00:04:37,728 --> 00:04:43,200 Well, we can say, to find oil, it's in order to find oil, that is going to 68 00:04:43,200 --> 00:04:48,517 explain why they want to drill. It's a theleological explanation as we 69 00:04:48,517 --> 00:04:54,451 saw in an earlier lecture and so that is going to be a reason marker, because 70 00:04:54,451 --> 00:05:00,500 their desire to find oil is what explains their desire to want to drill. 71 00:05:00,500 --> 00:05:03,048 Okay? Inevitably. 72 00:05:03,048 --> 00:05:06,492 What's that? Assuring. 73 00:05:06,492 --> 00:05:10,089 It's assuring you that it's obviously true. 74 00:05:10,089 --> 00:05:13,601 There's no way around it. It is inevitable. 75 00:05:13,601 --> 00:05:15,943 What's inevitable? More rigs, 76 00:05:15,943 --> 00:05:18,034 more roads, new pipelines, 77 00:05:18,034 --> 00:05:22,550 toxic waste, and bright lights would follow to get the 78 00:05:22,550 --> 00:05:23,583 oil out. Okay? 79 00:05:23,583 --> 00:05:27,950 He's assuring you that all of those things are going to happen. 80 00:05:27,950 --> 00:05:32,826 The previous argument, before the what's more, was simply an oil rig. 81 00:05:32,826 --> 00:05:37,629 Notice it's just an oil rig, one oil rig up there in that sentence, 82 00:05:37,629 --> 00:05:41,486 but now we've got more rigs, more roads, new pipelines. 83 00:05:41,486 --> 00:05:47,235 So if an oil rig has a major impact, all of this other stuff's going to a lot more 84 00:05:47,235 --> 00:05:50,801 of an impact. That's the point of the what's more. 85 00:05:50,801 --> 00:05:55,750 He's adding additional reasons why the permits should not be issued. 86 00:05:55,750 --> 00:06:00,057 Okay? And they would follow, that means it's going to follow what? 87 00:06:00,057 --> 00:06:01,995 In time. It's just temporal. 88 00:06:01,995 --> 00:06:07,236 It's not saying anything more than it's going to follow at a later time, but 89 00:06:07,236 --> 00:06:10,108 they're going to follow to get the oil out. 90 00:06:10,108 --> 00:06:14,918 That explains why they would follow, because, right, you would need them in 91 00:06:14,918 --> 00:06:19,657 order to get the oil out. So that's going to be an argument marker 92 00:06:19,657 --> 00:06:22,528 itself. Is it a reason marker or is it a 93 00:06:22,528 --> 00:06:24,180 conclusion marker? Well, 94 00:06:24,180 --> 00:06:27,889 the conclusion is that all that's going to follow. 95 00:06:27,889 --> 00:06:31,227 Right? And the premise is that it's needed in 96 00:06:31,227 --> 00:06:36,050 order to get the oil out. So this is going to be a premise marker. 97 00:06:36,050 --> 00:06:40,104 And the conclusion is that you get all that stuff, 98 00:06:40,104 --> 00:06:43,671 the pipelines, the roads, the waste and so on. 99 00:06:43,671 --> 00:06:47,482 Okay? So those are his reasons against giving a 100 00:06:47,482 --> 00:06:52,479 permit and then he says, the BLM couldn't see this. 101 00:06:52,479 --> 00:06:55,878 Okay? He just states it as a fact. 102 00:06:55,878 --> 00:06:58,240 But, what's the but doing there? 103 00:06:58,240 --> 00:07:02,575 Remember, what kind of word a but is. But is a discounting term. 104 00:07:02,575 --> 00:07:07,415 He's answering an objection. The objection is, well, you say all that 105 00:07:07,415 --> 00:07:12,905 would follow, but the BLM would disagree with you and they looked at it very 106 00:07:12,905 --> 00:07:16,373 carefully and they're an authority or an expert. 107 00:07:16,373 --> 00:07:19,452 So, the answer to that objection is the US 108 00:07:19,452 --> 00:07:24,883 Fish and Wildlife Service and the Environmental Protection Agency did see 109 00:07:24,883 --> 00:07:27,716 this. Notice that what comes after the but is 110 00:07:27,716 --> 00:07:32,709 more important than what came before it. What he's doing is saying that there's a 111 00:07:32,709 --> 00:07:37,456 contrast between what the BLM couldn't see and what the US Fish and Wildlife 112 00:07:37,456 --> 00:07:40,909 Service and the Environmental Protective Agency did see, 113 00:07:40,909 --> 00:07:45,656 but in addition to the contrast between those two, he's also saying it's more 114 00:07:45,656 --> 00:07:50,650 important that the US Fish and Wildlife Service and the Environmental Protection 115 00:07:50,650 --> 00:07:54,994 Agency did see it. Okay? So what comes after the but is 116 00:07:54,994 --> 00:07:59,650 taken to be more important. And what did they see? 117 00:07:59,650 --> 00:08:04,862 Both of these agencies recognized. Recognized implies, you can't recognize 118 00:08:04,862 --> 00:08:10,573 things that aren't true you know, if you see somebody and you say, I recognize my 119 00:08:10,573 --> 00:08:15,285 sister and it wasn't your sister, you didn't really recognize them. 120 00:08:15,285 --> 00:08:19,996 So to say you recognize is to assure people that it's really true. 121 00:08:19,996 --> 00:08:23,280 The devastating. Now devastating can't be good. 122 00:08:23,280 --> 00:08:27,237 so that's E-, effects of extensive oil drilling. 123 00:08:27,237 --> 00:08:29,044 Extensive, is that bad? No, 124 00:08:29,044 --> 00:08:32,658 extensive oil drilling is good in the right places. 125 00:08:32,658 --> 00:08:38,585 It gives us the kind of energy we need to be able to accomplish the goals that we 126 00:08:38,585 --> 00:08:41,910 want. Maybe you wish you didn't need extensive 127 00:08:41,910 --> 00:08:45,668 oil drilling, but, if you need it, then it's good when 128 00:08:45,668 --> 00:08:49,861 it's done in the right place. And that drilling would have a 129 00:08:49,861 --> 00:08:55,209 devastating effects on this area. And then those two agencies urge the BLM 130 00:08:55,209 --> 00:08:58,190 to refuse to allow it. Okay. 131 00:08:58,190 --> 00:09:01,349 Why? In order to protect the monument. 132 00:09:01,349 --> 00:09:06,192 And again, we've seen this kind of argument repeatedly at several points 133 00:09:06,192 --> 00:09:08,142 during this particular ad. 134 00:09:08,142 --> 00:09:13,590 That's saying that the goal is to protect the monument and that's what justifies 135 00:09:13,590 --> 00:09:18,567 urging the BLM to refuse to allow it. So this is going to be a premise marker. 136 00:09:18,567 --> 00:09:24,082 We've seen in order to protect, in order to preserve because we want to protect, 137 00:09:24,082 --> 00:09:26,369 and so on. He keeps repeating that. 138 00:09:26,369 --> 00:09:30,337 That's not a bad thing. Many times when someone's giving an 139 00:09:30,337 --> 00:09:34,815 argument, they repeat pretty much the same words as in other areas, because 140 00:09:34,815 --> 00:09:38,112 they're giving several arguments for a single conclusion. 141 00:09:38,112 --> 00:09:42,508 We'll actually see how those different reasons can fit together in the next 142 00:09:42,508 --> 00:09:46,962 section of the course, but for now, all we're doing is marking the words in an 143 00:09:46,962 --> 00:09:52,022 order to as a premise marker. We've finished four paragraphs. 144 00:09:52,022 --> 00:09:54,301 All right. We're almost done. 145 00:09:54,301 --> 00:09:56,172 Yeah. Yes [LAUGH]. 146 00:09:56,172 --> 00:10:01,787 Now we're on to paragraph five. And it starts, maybe the problem comes 147 00:10:01,787 --> 00:10:07,240 from giving management responsibility for this monument to the BLM. 148 00:10:07,240 --> 00:10:11,589 What about the word maybe? The word maybe is about as clear a case 149 00:10:11,589 --> 00:10:16,273 as you can get of a guarding term. It's saying it might be the case, it 150 00:10:16,273 --> 00:10:20,824 might not be the case. I'm not going to definitely claim that's 151 00:10:20,824 --> 00:10:25,240 where the problem comes from. I'm just suggesting that maybe so if 152 00:10:25,240 --> 00:10:28,720 somebody comes along and says that not's really true, 153 00:10:28,720 --> 00:10:31,062 I'm going to say, well maybe it's true, 154 00:10:31,062 --> 00:10:35,545 that's all I was claiming, and so I'm now able to defend my premise. 155 00:10:35,545 --> 00:10:36,348 Okay? Problem. 156 00:10:36,348 --> 00:10:39,738 What about problem? Got to be E-, right? 157 00:10:39,738 --> 00:10:43,931 Another clear example, because you can't have good things if 158 00:10:43,931 --> 00:10:48,125 there are problems. Sure, you can have problems on math tests 159 00:10:48,125 --> 00:10:51,969 that are good, but that's not the kind of problem we're 160 00:10:51,969 --> 00:10:55,533 talking about here. These kinds of problems are bad. 161 00:10:55,533 --> 00:11:01,475 And so that word gets marked as E-. So, the problem comes from namely, is 162 00:11:01,475 --> 00:11:08,368 explained by, giving management responsibility for this monument to the 163 00:11:08,368 --> 00:11:12,058 BLM. So it comes from, can get marked as a 164 00:11:12,058 --> 00:11:16,925 premise marker. It's giving management responsibility to 165 00:11:16,925 --> 00:11:21,810 the BLM that explains why there's a problem in the first place and that could 166 00:11:21,810 --> 00:11:25,380 be put in the form of an argument. That explanation could. 167 00:11:25,380 --> 00:11:28,519 Okay. So y is giving management responsibility 168 00:11:28,519 --> 00:11:33,227 to the BLM, create a problem, because the next sentence tells you, this 169 00:11:33,227 --> 00:11:38,550 is the BLM's first national monument. This is the first time they've ever done 170 00:11:38,550 --> 00:11:41,279 this. Almost all the other monuments are 171 00:11:41,279 --> 00:11:44,145 managed by the National Park Service. Okay? 172 00:11:44,145 --> 00:11:47,216 Nothing wrong in itself with being the first, 173 00:11:47,216 --> 00:11:51,788 there always has to be a first, so there's nothing evaluative there. 174 00:11:51,788 --> 00:11:55,631 What about almost all? Clearly guarding. Right? 175 00:11:55,631 --> 00:12:02,657 Because it's not all, it's almost all, so the claim is more defensible. 176 00:12:02,657 --> 00:12:09,071 Almost all the others are managed by the National Park Service. 177 00:12:09,071 --> 00:12:16,096 The Park Services' mission is to protect the resources under its care. 178 00:12:16,096 --> 00:12:22,001 Okay? Protect good resources, good, so those both get E+. 179 00:12:22,001 --> 00:12:25,700 While. What about the word while? 180 00:12:25,700 --> 00:12:30,130 It's not completely clear. You could read this as simply setting up 181 00:12:30,130 --> 00:12:34,891 a contrast between the parks service's mission and the bureau's mission, 182 00:12:34,891 --> 00:12:38,660 but you can also read it as responding to an objection. 183 00:12:38,660 --> 00:12:42,053 Well, doesn't the government protect those resources? 184 00:12:42,053 --> 00:12:47,014 And the answer is, well, the Park Service does, but the bureau has a different 185 00:12:47,014 --> 00:12:49,428 role. The bureau has always sought to 186 00:12:49,428 --> 00:12:54,128 accommodate economic uses. Okay? So if you read that while as but and you 187 00:12:54,128 --> 00:12:56,934 replace it with but, it seems to make sense. 188 00:12:56,934 --> 00:13:02,221 The park services' mission is to protect, but the bureau has always, it looks like 189 00:13:02,221 --> 00:13:06,724 you can replace it with a discounting term which means that while is 190 00:13:06,724 --> 00:13:09,748 functioning here as a discounting term. Okay? 191 00:13:09,748 --> 00:13:14,245 The bureau has always saw it, no guardian there. 192 00:13:14,245 --> 00:13:20,752 It's always sought that, right. To accommodate economic uses of those 193 00:13:20,752 --> 00:13:27,417 resources under its care. Even so, starts the next sentence. 194 00:13:27,417 --> 00:13:33,240 What is even so doing? Well, even so is a discounting term, 195 00:13:33,240 --> 00:13:38,690 because it's discounting an objection. The objection is, well they've always 196 00:13:38,690 --> 00:13:43,850 sought to accommodate those uses. Well, then how do you explain the fact 197 00:13:43,850 --> 00:13:48,210 that they got off to such a good start? They seem to be, okay? 198 00:13:48,210 --> 00:13:52,933 They seem to be, that's a guarding term. It's not saying they were. 199 00:13:52,933 --> 00:13:57,473 It's saying they seem to. We're getting off to a good start, good. 200 00:13:57,473 --> 00:14:01,873 Boy, there's an evaluative plus. You can't beat that for a clear 201 00:14:01,873 --> 00:14:06,971 evaluative plus. To a good start by enlisting broad public involvement in 202 00:14:06,971 --> 00:14:09,904 developing a management plan for the area. 203 00:14:09,904 --> 00:14:15,265 Well, what was good about it? They enlisted broad public involvement, 204 00:14:15,265 --> 00:14:20,241 therefore, it was good. Looks like by enlisting could be a 205 00:14:20,241 --> 00:14:24,083 premise marker. The premise is enlist, they enlisted 206 00:14:24,083 --> 00:14:29,670 broad public involvement, therefore, they got off to a good start. 207 00:14:29,670 --> 00:14:31,980 Yet. What's she at? 208 00:14:33,020 --> 00:14:37,069 Another discounting term. The agency's decision to allow drilling 209 00:14:37,069 --> 00:14:41,616 in the monument completely undercuts this process just as its beginning. 210 00:14:41,616 --> 00:14:46,039 The objection is, so if they got off to a good start, what's the problem? 211 00:14:46,039 --> 00:14:50,380 If they enlisted broad public involvement, what's the problem? 212 00:14:50,380 --> 00:14:55,405 Well, that's the objection and the response is, now they've decided to allow 213 00:14:55,405 --> 00:15:00,498 drilling in the monument and that completely undercuts the process that did 214 00:15:00,498 --> 00:15:02,643 enlist public involvement. Right? 215 00:15:02,643 --> 00:15:07,602 So, the yet is discounting the objection that says, there's no problem here, 216 00:15:07,602 --> 00:15:11,488 they're doing just fine, they got broad public involvement. 217 00:15:11,488 --> 00:15:16,514 They're saying the response to that objection is, but now they have not got 218 00:15:16,514 --> 00:15:20,200 public involvement. They're doing it without a complete 219 00:15:20,200 --> 00:15:24,720 review and so on as mentioned in the preceding paragraph. 220 00:15:24,720 --> 00:15:29,795 The agency's decision to allow oil drilling in the monument, completely, no 221 00:15:29,795 --> 00:15:34,596 guarding, right, completely undercuts. When it's that strong a word, like 222 00:15:34,596 --> 00:15:39,511 completely, you can almost say it, I'm assuring you, it's not just partially 223 00:15:39,511 --> 00:15:43,867 undercutting it's completely undercutting. That's a way of making you 224 00:15:43,867 --> 00:15:48,538 confident that it really does, at least partially undercut the process and 225 00:15:48,538 --> 00:15:53,967 undercuts sounds like something bad. I suppose you might not want to market as 226 00:15:53,967 --> 00:15:58,449 evaluative because you know, you could undercut a bad process and that would be 227 00:15:58,449 --> 00:16:01,822 a good thing. So, literally you probably should not 228 00:16:01,822 --> 00:16:06,375 mark that as evaluative, but it's clear what Robert Redford thinks 229 00:16:06,375 --> 00:16:09,480 about undercutting this process. And now, just. 230 00:16:09,480 --> 00:16:12,231 Just stands for justice, doesn't it? No. 231 00:16:12,231 --> 00:16:15,706 Remember from the very first word of this op-ed, 232 00:16:15,706 --> 00:16:19,978 just is nothing here. It means, at the same time when it was 233 00:16:19,978 --> 00:16:23,598 beginning. It's not an evaluative term, even though 234 00:16:23,598 --> 00:16:28,232 just sometimes means something about being just or fair or good. 235 00:16:28,232 --> 00:16:33,445 Here, it doesn't mean that at all. So, we're back to the very word that we 236 00:16:33,445 --> 00:16:37,625 began this op-ed with, and so that seems like a good place to stop. 237 00:16:37,625 --> 00:16:41,434 I'll stop marking here. There are other things you could mark. 238 00:16:41,434 --> 00:16:45,679 There are other things to discuss. These paragraphs, these op eds, are 239 00:16:45,679 --> 00:16:50,674 always extremely complex and interesting to try to get the detail straight, but 240 00:16:50,674 --> 00:16:54,420 I'll give you a chance to look at the next three paragraphs. 241 00:16:54,420 --> 00:16:58,228 They're all pretty short. And look at those paragraphs and see if 242 00:16:58,228 --> 00:17:03,098 you can do a close analysis on those, because as I've emphasized several times, 243 00:17:03,098 --> 00:17:06,648 the best. Indeed the only way to learn close 244 00:17:06,648 --> 00:17:10,760 analysis is to practice, practice, practice, practice, practice.