Report on the paper “Analysis of the grav-
itational signals from a newly discovered
Kardashev II civilization in the Sombrero
Galaxy: Part 1 by Whimbrel et al.”, sub-
mitted to the Journal of Xenoastronomical
Studies.
The authors present an analysis of gravita-
tional signals of intelligent origin arising
in the Sombrero Galaxy, detected in
publicly available archival data from the
System-Wide Imaging Network for Exo-
astronomy (SWINE). The transmitting
culture, which has not been the subject of
an earlier paper, is shown to be a
type II civilization on the Karda-
shev scheme, by which it is under-
stood that they have the means to
tap the entire energy output of
their star. This classification is
made partly on the basis of the
strength of the SWINE signal
(which in itself implies a basic
competence in stellar husbandry)
and partly on the basis of the cul-
tural information embedded in the
datathemselves. This assessmentis
probably correct, but given the
likelihoodthatbothtypeI and type
III civilizations may occasionally
emulate type II civilizations for their own
purposes (see, for instance, Chukar, Fran-
colin and Dickcissel, 2051), a word of cau-
tionmight well havebeen in order.
The species is shown to have originated
on a rocky terrestrial planet about the size
of Mars, and to have followed an evolu-
tionary pathway that is well approximated
by the uppermost track on the three-
parameter model of Bataleur and Becard
(2049). In their unmodified form, adult
members of this species are 3-metre tall
hexapodal oxygen-breathers with a DNA-
based reproductive system. The species
has a well-developed central nervous sys-
tem withmarked hemispheric asymmetry.
The authors apply standard analysis
tools and methods to extract cultural
information from the intercepted signal.
Given the absence of anything startlingly
new in their approach, the amount of
space that the authors spend discussing
this process is puzzling. Itmight havebeen
better simply to reference one of the many
review papers on the matter, such as the
recent and comprehensive overview of
analysis methods given in [omitted].
The authors then move on to the main
part of their paper: a lengthy discussion of
the information content of the decoded
message. They summarize the nature of
the transmitting civilization, the physiol-
ogy and evolutionary background of the
inhabitants, their technology and culture.
Although broadly satisfactory in its
details, this section would benefit from
shortening. As an example, the authors
dwell on the construction methods used
in the Dyson sphere that the aliens have
erected around their star, despite the fact
that broadly similar planet-dismantling,
reforging and gravity-control methods
have been used by at least 138 other Kar-
dashev II cultures (see, for instance,
Takahe and Smew, 2045). In the very first
sentence of subsection 3.2, the authors
state that there is “nothing particularly
novel about the construction methods”,
before nevertheless embarking on a blow-
by-blow account of those selfsame meth-
ods. I agree with the first sentence.
They conclude this section by present-
ing, in excerpted form, several images and
texts deemed to be of high significance
within the culture. These include 18 ‘stan-
zas’ of a much longer epic ‘poem’ written
in commemoration of the collapse of part
of the polar region of their Dyson sphere
about 1.2 million years ago, an accident
that resulted in the deaths of
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